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[征文作品] 【夏之梦】【都市】【玉瓶缘】（23号）（1-11)

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不知是作者行文习惯还是文字偏带一点返古意味，这篇文章从情节布置，人物关系，甚至某些调情的桥段都会让我想起一部名著，没错，就是金瓶梅。不过，相比之下，无论是人物细微的刻画还是情节主次的排布和故事矛盾的发展都有待深化，作者加油
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