xiaoga120 发表于 2018-10-25 15:42   全显示 1楼
虽写不来小说，但小说也没少看，主线，支线，最主要要逻辑清晰，写差的地方得自己圆的回来，其余才是润色，天马行空的情节，恐怖小说多加人物内心写照和场景秒速，风，光，声是恐怖小说的三大元素。
秋水姐姐这一身黑丝吊带情趣装还不恐怖吗？都得把男人榨干精尽人亡了。嘿嘿，哪天能让秋水姐姐榨一次那我做鬼也风流啊！哈哈
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