georgelaiha 发表于 2010-6-6 22:14   全显示 1楼
真棒，又看到新作了。
我覺得如果要寫成起點式的穿越文，那就得分出個主次，利用電腦搞發明發家致富和上手襄陽城諸女間比例要分配好，畢竟這裡不是起點，讀者要看的是色文，太長時間一路無色讀者就會覺得乏味，期待度進而下降，當然這兩者之間並不全互相衝突，就端看作者筆力了。如果能夠寫出讓人體上下皆爽的文章那就再好不過啦!
希望作者加油!
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