冲浪漂流瓶 发表于 2023-10-23 16:19   全显示 1楼
双视角叙事？这种展开还挺新奇的，
各种心理活动描写的很真实，场景叙述得也很有画面感！
能感觉得到作者的文字功底很扎实，
期待下一章的发展！
不过看小说第一句话，男女主后面是分开了？感觉是BD结局啊，不会是绿文吧，倒不是反对有绿，就是如果绿了，希望能标注一下，提前做个心理准备……
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